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題目
上星期五下午,Alice在家裡煮湯。
請根據左方的圖片寫一篇約50字的短文。注意:未依提示作答者,將予扣分。


寫作入門

左邊是一個「全民英檢」初級寫作的題目。一篇好的文章要符合哪些要點呢?

主旨切題
故事要描寫Alice因為接電話而忘了在煮湯,不要離題。

內容完整
三張圖片都要描述到,例如本題要提到Alice在家煮湯-接電話忘了在煮湯-湯燒焦。

字彙適當
不一定要用很難的字,但要寫出關鍵字,例如人、事、時、地、原因等。

時態正確
故事發生在上星期五,所以時態要用「過去式」。

組織清楚
文章要有主題句和發展句,有結論句則更好。

理解無礙
避免文法、用字、拼字及標點等錯誤,讓讀者容易理解。


寫作要領
如何寫出符合左頁所述要點的文章呢?請跟著四個步驟寫寫看:

1.仔細看圖,找出關鍵字
圖一描述「Alice在家煮湯的時候電話響起」,關鍵字有Alice、cook soup、at home、telephone、ring
圖二描述「Alice講電話講了很久,忘記在煮湯」,關鍵字有talk on the phone、for a long time、forget
圖三描述「Alice講完電話以後發現湯燒焦了」,關鍵字有hang up、find、burn

2.將關鍵字組成完整句子
利用關鍵字描述圖片的主要動作和情節:
圖一:1. Alice cooked soup at home.                         2. The telephone rang.
圖二:3. Alice talked on the phone for a long time.      4. She forgot that she was making soup.
圖三:5. Alice hung up the phone.                             6. She found that the soup had burned.

3.將句子連接起來
可用“while”, “and”, “after”將不同的句子連接起來:
圖一:(1+2) While Alice was cooking soup at home, the telephone rang.
圖二:(3+4) Alice talked on the phone for a long time and forgot that she was making soup.
圖三:(5+6) After Alice hung up the phone, she found that the soup had burned.

4.加入一些細節和結論句,就是一篇完整的故事
Last Friday, while Alice was cooking soup for dinner at home, the telephone rang. Her mother
called to ask her about her plans for the weekend. Alice talked on the phone for a long time and
forgot that she was making soup. After she hung up the phone, she found that the soup had burned.
She had no soup for dinner that day.
 
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